Will you please HELP Title my poem, and comment?
Love crushed,
Calling on November,
I’m feeling hushed,
Take this feeling dismember.
Spend my life on detour,
Bring on the freeze,
Flurry the snow pure,
Fluffy tail, sweet nose
Dark the cloud looms and settles,
Pink roses in a row,
He loves me, love me not petals.
Give you all my bunny hugs,
Feel the cold hard rain,
I love when you shrug,
Monsoon of downward pain.
My muse
Wrap the shiver,
Separation seize your armor,
Eternity forever I quiver,
Cuddle him and snooze,
My heart is in December,
Sundown till noon or longer,
Fire lighten embers.
Wait on tomorrow
Cool pen. Call it ...December?
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