Crystal Butterfly
Monday, July 26th, 2010How is this poem? Please answer?
Scarlet wrists and azure eyes
Bleeding lips tell bloody lies
My lips to seal your painful scars
My eyes to gaze at golden stars
Within the passages of night
Your heart will be my candlelight
And true to life will be your soul
To sever chains and make us whole
In darkest water did you sleep
And crystal tears in shadows weep
Your life was chained to stone and steel
Now take my hand and you will heal
Your onyx hair stroked crimson bold
Your soul more beautiful than gold
More lasting than a sunset sky
More fragile than a butterfly
Your precious heart grows stronger still
And in the end will move your will
To rise above the losting world
Of castles built with jewels and pearls
And on that day shall we go forth
As one in spirit to the north.
Thanks! being as I am 12 Its not perfect, but I tried
A star for your effort, Bree, and may you write more.
You do have a touch!
Your age is not important, but your work, the energy you bring to art, and your own willingness to strive to make it better.
Good luck, keep scribbling!