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Crystal Butterfly

Monday, July 26th, 2010

How is this poem? Please answer?

Scarlet wrists and azure eyes

Bleeding lips tell bloody lies

My lips to seal your painful scars

My eyes to gaze at golden stars

Within the passages of night

Your heart will be my candlelight

And true to life will be your soul

To sever chains and make us whole

In darkest water did you sleep

And crystal tears in shadows weep

Your life was chained to stone and steel

Now take my hand and you will heal

Your onyx hair stroked crimson bold

Your soul more beautiful than gold

More lasting than a sunset sky

More fragile than a butterfly

Your precious heart grows stronger still

And in the end will move your will

To rise above the losting world

Of castles built with jewels and pearls

And on that day shall we go forth

As one in spirit to the north.
Thanks! being as I am 12 Its not perfect, but I tried

A star for your effort, Bree, and may you write more.

You do have a touch!

Your age is not important, but your work, the energy you bring to art, and your own willingness to strive to make it better.

Good luck, keep scribbling!

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